Perfectly blend in my own breeze,
Rollicking Rambling like a bee
I was myself in this world
Until n unless I saw this Girl.
Fairing in a fairy white,
Her smile sprinkling a cute sight,
She had a strange panache
That made me a slave under her mark.
Might be sent to the earth,
Being Envied by the Goddess of Beauty
She faired no less than anyone
who dwelled in this mighty city !
Scurrying insouciantly behind her
Drained in her ecstatic elan
Heart beating fast,nerves pumping vast
I was in love first and last !
Trotting towards her inner circle,
I Crouched behind her holy figure
To present her my love words with a rose,
But then she spoke !
Monday, July 6, 2009
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i like the ending !! FOdu hai !! .... Abhinav's finally in love !! kudos !!
ReplyDeleteI took it as if in the end, the girl proposed before u could speak a word !!
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ReplyDeleteThat's the fun of a poem..There is a deep ending....'But' is important here...
thats nice:)
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